请检查一小篇英语作文,病句修改Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of spring.It began in the last day of the lunar year,end in the 15th day of lunar New Year,also is the Lantern Festival.During the Spring

请检查一小篇英语作文,病句修改Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of spring.It began in the last day of the lunar year,end in the 15th day of lunar New Year,also is the Lantern Festival.During the Spring
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Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of spring.It began in the last day of the lunar year,end in the 15th day of lunar New Year,also is the Lantern Festival.During the Spring Festival,people use red lantern and Spring Festival couplets decorate a house,put on all kinds of colored clothes,often visit friends and relatives or together eat dumplings,fish,meat and other delicious food.The children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money

请检查一小篇英语作文,病句修改Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of spring.It began in the last day of the lunar year,end in the 15th day of lunar New Year,also is the Lantern Festival.During the Spring
The Chinese Spring Festival is celebrated at the end of winter and the beginning of spring. It begins on the last day of the lunar year, ends on the 15th day of the lunar New Year,which is also the Lantern Festival. During the Spring Festival, people use red lanterns and Spring Festival couplets to decorate their houses, put on all kinds of colourful clothes and visit their friends and relatives or gather together to eat dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious food. The children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money.

...celebrate in the end of...
warmth 可以用 early 代替 （我不太清楚你想表达的意思，是想说早春吗？）
...lunar year. The 15th of lunar year..
..decorate their house...（people是负数，所以要用“他们的房子” 而不是“一个房子”）
...clothes. ...

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...celebrate in the end of...
warmth 可以用 early 代替 （我不太清楚你想表达的意思，是想说早春吗？）
...lunar year. The 15th of lunar year..
..decorate their house...（people是负数，所以要用“他们的房子” 而不是“一个房子”）
...clothes. They ofthen...
...relatives and eat delicious foods together. （eat together，食物可以用delicious foods代替，不用放那么多）
...forward to receive.. (to 后面不能是ing 动词)

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