简单英语文章修改下有没有病句It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much!Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.Jet Li is in the movie.I like he very much.He is very successful star.I li

简单英语文章修改下有没有病句It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much!Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.Jet Li is in the movie.I like he very much.He is very successful star.I li
简单英语文章修改下有没有病句
It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much!Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like he very much.He is very successful star.I like he very much!
Can you see “Shaolin Temole”?It is really good movie!
Jet Li is a popular Gongfu Star,who used to play the hero in the classic film called Huang Feihong.Not only great success has he acchived in the entertainment career,Li also wins a lot of respect beacuse of his charitable acts.

简单英语文章修改下有没有病句It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much!Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.Jet Li is in the movie.I like he very much.He is very successful star.I li
It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an action movie.Many people like it very much!Because it is a very exciting and intereating action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like him very much.He is a very successful star.
Can you see “Shaolin Temole”?（这句话不知道你想表达什么意思）It is really good movie!
Jet Li is a popular Gongfu Star who used to play the hero in the classic film called Huang Feihong.He has not only acchived the entertainment career,Li also wins a lot of respect beacuse of his charitable acts.

1.Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.
===Because it is a very exciting and intereating action movie.
2.I like he very much==I like him very much.HE是主语形式,而这里要用宾语.
3....

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1.Because it is very exciting and intereating action movie.
===Because it is a very exciting and intereating action movie.
2.I like he very much==I like him very much.HE是主语形式,而这里要用宾语.
3.He is very successful star.==He is a very successful star.
4.I like he very much! 同2一样的问题.
5.It is really good movie=It is really a good movie.

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有单词拼错误还有语法问题。
句号后都要空格
It is "Shaolin Temole". It is an action movie, many people like it very much! Because it is very exciting and interesting,
Jet Li is the main actor in the movie. I...

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有单词拼错误还有语法问题。
句号后都要空格
It is "Shaolin Temole". It is an action movie, many people like it very much! Because it is very exciting and interesting,
Jet Li is the main actor in the movie. I like him very much, He is a very successful actor, I really like him very much! Have you ever watch "Shaolin Temole"? It is really good!
Jet Li is a popular Kung Fu movie star, who used to play the role of the hero in the classic film called Huang Feihong. Not only great success he has achieved in the entertainment career but also wins a lot of respect because of his charitable acts.

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1.在 Because it is 后加 a ,因为这里要表达的意思是"这是一部很有趣的电影
Because it is A very exciting and intereating action movie.
2.I like he very much, 应该是 I like him very much. he 不能做宾语，只能做主语， 所以要用him
3.He is...

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1.在 Because it is 后加 a ,因为这里要表达的意思是"这是一部很有趣的电影
Because it is A very exciting and intereating action movie.
2.I like he very much, 应该是 I like him very much. he 不能做宾语，只能做主语， 所以要用him
3.He is very successful star, 应该是 He is a very successful star, 他是一个很成功的明星， 要加一个 a
4.can you see " Shaolin Temole"? 你看过" Shaolin Temole没有？ 要能 Did you see " Shaolin Temole"? ,如果用 Can 那就成了你能看 " Shaolin Temole"吗？
5. It is really good movie, 还是要在 really 前加 a, 这是一部非常好看电影

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It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much! Because it is a very exciting and interesting action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like him very much. He is a very su...

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It is “Shaolin Temole”.Itis an acion movie.Many people like it very much! Because it is a very exciting and interesting action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like him very much. He is a very successful star. I like him very much!
have you seen “Shaolin Temole”? It is really a good movie！
Jet Li is a popular Kongfu Star, who used to play the hero in the classic film called Huang Feihong. Not only great success has he achieved in the entertainment career, Li also wins a lot of respect beacuse of his charitable acts.

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It is “Shaolin Temole”.It is an acion movie.Many people like it very much because it is a very exciting and interesting action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like him very much. He is a very suc...

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It is “Shaolin Temole”.It is an acion movie.Many people like it very much because it is a very exciting and interesting action movie.
Jet Li is in the movie.I like him very much. He is a very successful star.
Have you ever seen “Shaolin Temole”? It is really a good movie！
Jet Li is a popular Gongfu Star, who used to play the hero in the classic film called Huang Feihong. Not only great success has he acchived in the entertainment career, Li but also wins a lot of respect beacuse of his charitable acts.
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