My room is a cozy room.There is a big wood bed in my room.There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed.There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard.There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.In my r

My room is a cozy room.There is a big wood bed in my room.There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed.There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard.There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.In my r
My room is a cozy room.There is a big wood bed in my room.There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed.There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard.There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.In my room,here is a pink rug on the floor.Opposite the bed,there is a little green bookcase.A lot of funny story books in the bookcase.There is a bright lamp on front of the bookcase.There is a wood dressing table.There is a painting of flowers above the dressing table.There is a desk between the bookcase and the dressing table.There is a computer and some cote books on the desk and a wastebasket under the desk.Beside the bookcase,there is an old little cabinet next to the bookcase.There is a blue case on the cabinet and cone yellow flowers in the case.There is shelf above the cabinet.There is a radio on the shelf.I love my cozy room.请帮我看看我的文法对不对!
如果我的文法有错,请帮我更改!
我想问有没其他的词可代替”there is”
因为我也觉得文章不停的话”there is”
还有最后一句” I love my cozy room.”
如果会的,请问可怎样结尾?

My room is a cozy room.There is a big wood bed in my room.There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed.There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard.There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.In my r
不仅仅是文法不对,标点符号也不对,全是There is, 是在造句,不是写作文,全无文法.只能从写了.
cozy是舒适的意思,可以用其他几个舒适相同的单词!There is也是如此,有些句子可以用which、that is来链接上下文.
beside还有很多其他的意思, 这里最好不要用!真的要说旁边的话就用aside吧.
There is a blue case on the cabinet and cone yellow flowers in the case.a blue case是什么啊?黄色球形的花在一个case里?

wood - wooden
a bedside cupboard - an endtable
bedside cupboard - endtable
wardrobe - closet/dresser
here is - there is
A lot of funny story books in the bookcase - There are a lot...

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wood - wooden
a bedside cupboard - an endtable
bedside cupboard - endtable
wardrobe - closet/dresser
here is - there is
A lot of funny story books in the bookcase - There are a lot of funny story books on the bookcase.
wood - wooden
cote books???
Beside the bookcase, there is an old little cabinet next to the bookcase - 重复了， 去掉前面
cone yellow flowers ????
shelp - a shelf
above - on top of / over

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wood应为wooden 后者才是形容词
描述台灯那一句on front of 应为in front of
wood dressing table 应为 wooden dressing table

基本上问题不大…但是你的there be句型用得实在太频繁了…会使读者产生厌倦情绪…形容物品存在于一个空间内可多用从句…

天哪。。。都是there be句型？！
可以用倒装句代替，把状语放在句首就成了
There is a big wood bed in my room可以改为In my room is a big wood bed.