帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoo

帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoo
帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!
Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoon,we eat lunch.then we go to the shui shang le yuan.We are catching many catch loachs.The we are drive cars.We are very happy!

帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoo
Today it'sunny day.I went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan!We visited milk farm and saw how to make milk.The baby cow ate grass and drank milk.We went fishing and flying kites.They were excited.In the afternoon,we had lunch.then we went to the shui shang le yuan.We caught many loachs.Then we drove cars.We were very happy!

Today it\'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today! Visit how creat milk. The baby cow ate grass and drink milk. We are went fish and fly kites.They are excited. In the...

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Today it\'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today! Visit how creat milk. The baby cow ate grass and drink milk. We are went fish and fly kites.They are excited. In the afternoon, we ate lunch. then we went to the shui shang le yuan. We are catch many catch loachs. The we are drive cars. We are very happy!

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Today is a sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan to see how the milk is produced . The baby cow eats grass and drinks milk. We went fishing and flied kites.They were exci...

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Today is a sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan to see how the milk is produced . The baby cow eats grass and drinks milk. We went fishing and flied kites.They were excited. In the afternoon, we ate lunch. Then we went to shui shang le yuan. We caught many catch loachs. Then we drove cars. We were very happy!

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Today it's a sunny day.We have been to Guang ming nong chang and shui shang le yuan! We visited milk farm and saw how to make milk. The baby cow eats grass and drinks milk. We went fishing and flied k...

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Today it's a sunny day.We have been to Guang ming nong chang and shui shang le yuan! We visited milk farm and saw how to make milk. The baby cow eats grass and drinks milk. We went fishing and flied kites.They were excited. In the afternoon, we had lunch. then we went to the shui shang le yuan. We have caught many loachs. Then we drove cars. We were very happy.

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Today IS A sunny day.We went to Guang ming (nong chang)FARM (with)AND （shui shang le yuan）THE WATER WORLD (today)!
WE FIRST visitED GUANG MING FARM AND SAW how (creat) milk WAS PRODUCED. THEN WE ...

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Today IS A sunny day.We went to Guang ming (nong chang)FARM (with)AND （shui shang le yuan）THE WATER WORLD (today)!
WE FIRST visitED GUANG MING FARM AND SAW how (creat) milk WAS PRODUCED. THEN WE SAW (the)SOME baby cowS eatING grass and drinkING milk. AFTER THAT we (are) went fishing and (fly)FLEW kites.(They are)THESE ACTIVITIES WERE VERY excit(ed)ING.
In the afternoon, AFTER we HAD (eat)HAD(此为过去完成时) lunch, (then) we (go)WENT to the WATER WORLD. We (are catching) CAUGHT many (catch) loachs THERE. TheN we (are drive)DROVE cars. We (are)WERE very happy!
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