求检查语法错误并修改My BirthdayMy birthday is June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very exercited. Because my parents will give me some gifts. They gave me a novel last birthday. And they gave me a beautiful book bag. What did they give me s

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求检查语法错误并修改My BirthdayMy birthday is June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very exercited. Because my parents will give me some gifts. They gave me a novel last birthday. And they gave me a beautiful book bag. What did they give me s
求检查语法错误并修改
My Birthday
My birthday is June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very exercited. Because my parents will give me some gifts. They gave me a novel last birthday. And they gave me a beautiful book bag. What did they give me some candies for my birthday. My mom buys birthday cake every birthday. What will they give me for my birthday? I don’t know, but I know they can’t give me book bags and novels.

求检查语法错误并修改My BirthdayMy birthday is June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very exercited. Because my parents will give me some gifts. They gave me a novel last birthday. And they gave me a beautiful book bag. What did they give me s
第二句：it's a hot day,不是很好.你这么写好像是没年的6月7日都是很热的,如果下雨呢?有点儿绝对哦.改成 It's usually a hot day.
第三句中的exercited是拼写错误的单词.改为excited,激动.
第四句,不要用将来时will,因为生日是每年都发生的事情,你的父母通常都会给你礼物,把will去掉.
第六句可以和第五句连起来成一句话,比较不累赘,They gave me a novel and a beautiful bag last birthday.book bag是要表达书包吗?用bag就行了.或者school bag.
第七句：表达的意思是他们通常在生日给我什么吗?如果是改成：What do they always give me for my birthyday?
最后两句：What will they give me for my birthday this year?要加上一个this year 标明时间.
But I know they won't give me bags and novels again.

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My birthday is in June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very execited because my parentsl give me some gifts on that day. They gave me a novel last birthday,and they gave me a beautiful schoolbag. What did they give me some candies for my birthday. My mom buys birthday cake every birthday. What will they give me for my birthday? I don’t know, but I know they couldn't give me book bags and novels any more.

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