请帮忙找错,Shopping in the FutureI think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't th

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请帮忙找错,Shopping in the FutureI think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't th

请帮忙找错,Shopping in the FutureI think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't th
请帮忙找错,Shopping in the Future
I think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't think that retail stores will disappear someday.To some people shopping is not only to buy something,it is a lifeway to getting relax.

请帮忙找错,Shopping in the FutureI think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't th
Whenever and wherever you are改成
Whenever it is and wherever you are
Hoever
However
someday不用改
to buy something改为
buying something
to getting
改为get
不能保证全对
但我改的都是对的

Whenever and wherever you are改成
Whenever it is and wherever you are
Hoever
However
someday改成
in someday
it is a lifeway to getting relax改成
it is a lifeway for getting relax

把however,改为moreover.getting 改为get

Hoever However
getting get

I think shopping online will be more and more popular in the future. Because it is very convenient and efficient. Whenever and wherever you are, you can buy anything you want. However, I don't think t...

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I think shopping online will be more and more popular in the future. Because it is very convenient and efficient. Whenever and wherever you are, you can buy anything you want. However, I don't think that retail stores will disappear one day. For some people, doing shopping is not only to buy something, but also a lifeway to getting relax.
纠正了几个错误的地方,有些地方改了下,感觉会好点,不那么累赘。

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前面是单词的错误,我认为it is a lifeway to getting relax.应该在it is 前加上but also .因为not only ...but also是一个固定句式呵呵!

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