作业帮看看我这几句英语有没有错误吧!写出来也是心理原因.Someday I'll beat her!But until nowshe beats me 5 times,but I just beather 4 times.We've been having a test 10 times in ourgrade.She is the only rival for me.班上个女的,到
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看看我这几句英语有没有错误吧!写出来也是心理原因.Someday I'll beat her!But until nowshe beats me 5 times,but I just beather 4 times.We've been having a test 10 times in ourgrade.She is the only rival for me.班上个女的,到
看看我这几句英语有没有错误吧!写出来也是心理原因.
Someday I'll beat her!But until nowshe beats me 5 times,but I just beather 4 times.We've been having a test 10 times in ourgrade.She is the only rival for me.
班上个女的,到了开学我就发誓不能让学号排我后的一个超过我.尽管后来我知道我俩考试为同分.小弟现读初二.望请指教!
看看我这几句英语有没有错误吧!写出来也是心理原因.Someday I'll beat her!But until nowshe beats me 5 times,but I just beather 4 times.We've been having a test 10 times in ourgrade.She is the only rival for me.班上个女的,到
①beat虽然有“打败”的意思,但更多作“击、打”讲.建议用defeat,直接了当.
②第二句话出现了两个but,且第二个but前加了逗号,这都是错误的.建议删去第一个but,再把逗号删去,或把but改成however.
③第二句话要用完成时：Until now,she has defeated me for five times,however,I just succeed for four times!
④现在完成进行时用的不够自然,当然语法上正确.完成时就够了.
⑤第三句话末语意不通顺.We've been having 10 tests in our grade.
⑥rival后介词用错,应为to.（a rival to sb/for sth）
你的志向非常高远!但英语还得加强呀~平时要多使用英语,培养语感,否则你的英语很可能很怪异哦~加油!
有语言上的问题可以来找我.